Blue and blue
Blue everywhere.
Foamy blue
Don't have a clue.
Where are you? And where are you?
Touch me blue, touch me blue
and so I become touchy blue.
I float and float; Dive and dive within
To catch you search out and in.
Found not in the bottom , not in sky
Where are you and where do you stay?
On this sea shore I lay and lie.
Thousand waves washes me away
Put me back and wash me away.
Where are you and where do you stay?
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Hrushikesha Mohanty
1st May 2012
6 comments:
too absorbing...too deep for ordinary meaning...continue the good work ..Professor saab...
Mana chnua kabita tia
Dear Sir,
Namaskar! Nice and very interesting poem
Saroj
Rushi dear,
Beautiful "colourology" and a fine poem. Now you are rapidly acquiring a control over space of expression. Earlier you were taking a longer space. Now you have sharpened it in expert hand. Just change the word "washes" to Wash in the last but 2 lines.
Congratulation.
But I have to ask Anjali that why did you suddenly fall in love with Blue. Ha...ha
Apa
Rushi dear,
Beautiful "colourology" and a fine poem. Now you are rapidly acquiring a control over space of expression. Earlier you were taking a longer space. Now you have sharpened it in expert hand. Just change the word "washes" to Wash in the last but 2 lines.
Congratulation.
But I have to ask Anjali that why did you suddenly fall in love with Blue. Ha...ha
Apa
Sir i am not so good in finding meanings hidden in a poem. And this one is so abstract but very communicative. It is true that we neither adsorb or absorb the "blue".
Bharat
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