Dear All
This poem is published in Surjyaprabha dated 13th September '09. The poem deals with pathos of native place that is being deserted consistently. The mother village talks of affection, she had for everybody. Wonders, what wrong she did so that kids once left don't feel for returning and remembering making different pleas (I'm too busy for a visit). But, she has not left the hope of their returns!
Hope later I can translate to English.
Here is the poem in Odia ....
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I have read your poem all interst & enthusiasm, as ever.
The plot/ theme was really good/ strong.
But, honestly, your last poem was more poetic.
But I must salute to your poetic feelings and minute observation on rural life.
Pl. keep it up. : Prof. Rabi N. Subudhi, KIIT Univ.
I liked the poem. Expression was beautiful. Nicely worded. Critical comment : I have seen some region specific words like “kemiti go” which can be avoided to make it more nice. Regards, Surjya Mohanty, Wipro Ltd.
Its nice to have your mail Sir.
Really you have such an art also as a poet. Its a nice poem.
with regards Dr. Somanath Tripathy, IIT Patna
simply great. : Prof.Pramod Meher
Thank you very much for the poem. It touches our heart by remembering the past, the lament of not being remembered and the hope for the return of the goodtimes. A lovely poem indeed. Prof.R.C. Pradhan, University of Hyderabad
Hrushi,
Thanks for the poem- it's good even for a novice like me.
Nigam
Dr. Nigam P. Rath
Research Professor
Department of Chemistry and Biochemistry
University of Missouri- St. Louis, USA
Dear Dadei: Congrats, Bada Bhai
Biswajit Mishra, Ph.D.
Professor and Head
Department of Geology and Geophysics
Indian Institute of Technology
Kharagpur 721302 India
Dear Hrushikesha, This is a beautiful and touching poem. I am glad that you cherish those golden memories through your songs. I guess we are all the culprits to bring pain to the mother village. I enjoyed the poem.
Prof. Madhu Mohanty, University of California,
Dear Prof. Mohanty,
It is the cry of our native palce (mother like) and also of every mother (parents).
Thankyou.
With reagrds,
Sanghamitra Mohanty
Professor, Head CS Dept. Utkal University
received by email .........
Sir
It is really heart touching. I liked it very much. Keep on writing emotional poem which i like most.
AKR
Prof. (Dr.) Amiya Kumar Rath, Director (A& R),
Department of Computer Science & IT Engineering,
College of Engineering Bhubaneswar (CEB),
Bhubaneswar-751024, Orissa.
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