That was the time when all lovely boys were to be born on dusty villages and so did this boy at the end of a lane, so that he could be the most lovely boy in a directly God given country land.
The longing of love, for the boy was always so much and so intense that as if there were not enough love making for him being. Once for chronic missing of love he took a first flight to Agra and leaned over all the walls of Taj Mahal in turns for panacea.
For that being not enough he bent and bent on his back but didn't broke off, for later he was designated to be shapeless and amorphous in the back yards of neighbours and self. As, an amorphous can make into Forbes he developed a clandestinely secret desire to be listed. But, Forbes didn't get a right page where he could be rested with some kind of misplaced honour; so created a page in between love and hate and on that page, listed the boy with a caption "Seasonally Lovable"; but all others are said to call him, "LOVELY BOY" for their unknown reasons.
Hrushikesha Mohanty
10th Dec. 12
15 comments:
Dear Hrushikesh Babu,
Namaskar. Really a beautiful story, albeit a little classical. Thank you.
Rabi Kanungo
A very nice thought and a very nice depiction. The only thing is that the
language needs to be clearer at places. A poem can have a lot of density
and even some linguistic licences but not prose, even poetic prose. You
use this medium well, so I would request you to continue with it.
Sir, namskar.Its a really lovely story. honor should be recognized..
Thank you Sir
Dear Sir,
That was a short and thought provoking story of how a person, law, or any thing as such in place of "Lovely Boy" gets recognition to the best even though his/its place is intermediary. Looking forward for the next story from you.
supriya
Thanks Supriya
dear Anonymous
Sure, if there is, it will be honored at least by somebody I
hope :)
thanks
hm
Sir:
I enjoyed and like it. It is highly thoughts projective and somehow testify the reality.
Thanks and regards
Akhil.
Sir in only 3 paragraphs you have completed an outline of never fulfilling desires of a person plus pride.
wonderfully lovable
wonderful, Hrushikesha Mohanty sir.
Seems incomplete, Hrusikesh Bhai
What an idea Sir Ji.... Seasonally Lovable...!!
sir.. trying to figure out the meaning.. why to pretend as i understood, when in reality i did not
You are Apt
Frankly, I am not sure of what is love; can you please explain it in your blog.
If it is amorphous then the desire of the "LOVELY BOY" might have been fulfilled.
GPB
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