Monday, September 28, 2015

BARNAGITI ::1-10


25 comments:

Anonymous said...

Please don't skip any letters sir. Following the tradition, write for ଙ, ଞ as ନ and for ଣ as ଅ.

Anonymous said...

Excellent...e bhali rachana aji kali khub birala

Anonymous said...

Writing one each day is a massive feat! Great, Sir!

Anonymous said...

ପରମ୍ପରାନୁଯାୟୀ ଚମ୍ପୂ ଓ ଚଉତିଶା ଗୁଡ଼ିକରେ ଙ, ଞ ସ୍ଥାନରେ 'ନ', ଣ ସ୍ଥାନେ 'ଅ' ବ୍ୟବହୃତ |

Anonymous said...

ଐ, ୟ, କ୍ଷ ରେ ହୋଇପାରିବ କିନ୍ତୁ ଙ,ଞ, ଣ ରେ କଣ ସମ୍ଭବ !!

Anonymous said...

Waiting for ଐ, ଙ, ଞ, ଣ, ୟ, କ୍ଷ and how you skilfully tackle those

Anonymous said...

ଇନ୍ଦ୍ରଜାଲ ସପନେ ପରଶେ ମୁକୁତା" ‐ ବାଃ, ଆପଣଙ୍କ word engineering skills ଭାରି ନିଆରା ସାର୍! ବେଶ୍ ଭଲ ହୋଇଛି କବିତାଟି!!!

Anonymous said...

ଇନ୍ଦ୍ରଜାଲ ସପନେ ପରଶେ ମୁକୁତା" ‐ ବାଃ, ଆପଣଙ୍କ word engineering skills ଭାରି ନିଆରା ସାର୍! ବେଶ୍ ଭଲ ହୋଇଛି କବିତାଟି!!!

Anonymous said...

Life surivies because of Goddess laxmi. how true it is? even Lord Jaganath included.

Anonymous said...

Incredible

Anonymous said...

ସାର୍ଂକ କଲମରୁ ଆଉ ଏକ ସୁନ୍ଦର ଶୃଷ୍ଟି.ଶବ୍ଦର ଚମତ୍କାରିତା 'ଈ' କୁ ନେଇ....ବହୁତ୍ ଭଲ ଲାଗିଲା

Anonymous said...

ସାର ଛୋଟ ଅନୁରୋଧ,ଆପଣ ଏ ବର୍ଣଗୀତି କୁ ପୁସ୍ତକ ରୂପେ ପ୍ରକାଶ କରନ୍ତୁ... #ଓଡ଼ିଆ ସାହିତ୍ୟ ପାଇଁ ଏହା ଏକ ସୁନ୍ଦର ଉପହାର ହେବ ନିଶ୍ଚୟ !

Anonymous said...

Don't forget to give us all eBooks. :)

Anonymous said...

sir apananka sabu lekha hni bahuta badhia heithaye.. Au ye bhala naheba kemiti.. Au sabu like hni karibe.

Anonymous said...

Pleasure is mine sir.in fact, thank you ! "@hmcs_hcu: @tapasr10 a lot of thanks for liking these poems."

Anonymous said...

Ati ucha kotir kabita.

Anonymous said...

@hmcs_hcu sir apana ekdharare kabi au lekhaka..✌

Anonymous said...

Namaskar AgyaN ! Bahut Sundar

Anonymous said...

ଉର୍ଧ ମୁଖି ଚାହିଁଥିଲି ସୁଚନା ପାଇଁ,
ଉଣା ଅଧିକେ ବୁଝିଲି ଶବ୍ଦାର୍ଥ ପାଇ

Anonymous said...

Sir I am collecting all of this series. It's very nice.

Anonymous said...

Sir,

This is Excellent. Very happy to read this.
There would be a lot of efforts put to make this a reality.
This is a unique effort.
Looking forward to many more creative creations from your pen.

Anonymous said...

It is a great idea to write poems where each line starts with the same Alphabet! No doubt, it is too difficult.
We visited your BlogSpot and seen the posts. If we had known Odia Alphabets we would have relished more.
With best wishes,

Anonymous said...

Honestly speaking, bhala kabita.
Odia sahityara bhasa krame bilupti pathe. Apananka kabita bhitare bhasa bibhaba chamatkar. Dekha jau..............

Anonymous said...

Great writing starting with ଋ. Though difficult to comprehend fully, can understand partially with help of words gven at the end.

Anonymous said...

ଖୁବ୍ ସୁନ୍ଦର ହେଇଛି ସାର୍