had a swift over view of the entire creation of an emotional and devotional masterpiece with meticulously selected words to club up a series of circumstances and instances through which a devout soul passes through in our day today life often regretting, revolting and wondering at "Hei mo Ishwara". I need much more time at leisure to grasp those intricate and innate words although. A good piece of poetic to preserve. 👌👌👍👍
Namaskar, apanank Ishwar, ama samastankara ishwar, Amasamastanku tankar dayara patra kari sabudinapaeen rakhibe boli asha. Ye Kabita ti tahara madhyama rahu, Ehi mor asha. 🙏🙏
Hello sir Knowing the depth of your writing in English, I regret not learning odia.Though expressions are best put in mother tongue, I hope you will write few in English for the benefit of non-odia fans like me. Congratulations sir for being such a great poet. 😁😁👍👍
Sir! Truly an amazing way to demonstrate the relationship between the Almighty and an ardent follower of Him. The follower, here, presents himself or herself as an innocent kid, a matured young boy, and a holistic person. On other side, Almighty here refers to a being who is supernatural; operator of this gigantic world; omnipresent; omnipotent; omniscient; an emotional, loving, and caring being. His existence is drawn from the content of Mahabharata, Ramayana, Pastime of Lord Krishna, and various religious scriptures. His beautiful existence is also drawn from Ontological, Cosmological, Teleological arguments given by various schools of thought
Very nice sir. But not completed full reading. Bhakta ra bhava re bandha se thakura, he Mora Ishwara, he Mora Ishwara. Bahut sundar bhava sahita lekha heichi sir. 🙏🙏😌
Sir, Namaskar. As per the task given to me in order to express my personal view on your 50 poems , I feel honoured as well delighted to communicate the following comments to you to the best of my knowledge and ability: Sir, every song of yours is associated with the sublime feeling of love for form as well as formless God. Your prayer to see Him is so intense and emotional that one can understand the depth of your anxiety very clearly from it. No doubt, sir you are a devine person by nature and your thought process might have tempted you to write such poetic prayers. Poems are well written by you and it seems to me as if you have ignited the sacred feelings of your heart and mind in form of prayers to go very closer to the Almighty and also to see Him. I believe that God can see us ,understand us and our deeds and misdeeds are measured by Him. No doubt, sir, the poems you have written, have some originality in depth and are spontaneously flown in to the devine path of God. Readers will appreciate heartfully once they go through it. With my best wishes and regards. 🙏🏽
Yesterday I have gone through only few pages . It is nice Hrushi. Today in library I will go through. My first impression is very nice. I also feel your devotion in the flow of your lines you have written about your utmost devotion to He mo Iswara.
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Every line is flowing beautifully like a fountain touching both the ends.... makes the conversation or dialogue soulful.
ଖୁବ ସୁନ୍ଦର ଭାବ ଓ ଶବ୍ଦ ସଂଯୋଜନା। 🙏🏻
ଶେଷରେ ମୁଁ କହିବି,
ହେ ଈଶ୍ବର, ଲେଖୁ ଲେଖୁ ଭାବୁ ଭାବୁ ତୁମେ ଆସି ମୋ ଅନ୍ତରେ , ମୋ ସମ୍ପୂର୍ଣ୍ଣ ସତ୍ତାରେ ପରିବ୍ୟାପ୍ତ,
ମୋ ହୃଦୟ ସିକ୍ତ।
ମୁଁ ଜାଣିଲିଣି ତୁମେ ଆଉ କେହି ନୁହେଁ, ମୁଁ ଗଢିଥିବା ମୁଁ ଟିଏ,
ତୁମେ ଆଉ ମୁଁ ଏକାକାର, ଅଭିନ୍ନ, ଅସୀମ।
The concept of the preface is derived from my solitary rendezvous with river Brahmani at Saranga (ananta sayan) during the first pandemic wave.
Mun mora paribar saha eyi srusti ra kichi ansha padhi sunayili, semane bi abhibhuta hoyigale. Apan jane siddha purush.
Sir ki apurba seyi anubhuti "Hey Mo Iswara" padhibara khub sundar aau mana chuaan upalabdhi
କ୍ରମାଙ୍କ ଆଠ ଯାଏଁ ପଢିଲି ।
କବିତା ଗୁଡ଼ିକରେ କବିପଣପାଇଁ ଆଦୌ ନିଘା ନାହିଁ ।
ଅନୁଭବର ଭାବସମୂହରେ ମାଁ ସରସ୍ଵତୀଙ୍କ ଆଶୀର୍ବାଦ ଅଛି ।
କବିପଣ ସେଠି ସ୍ବୟଂ ଅବତରିଛି ।
🙏🙏🕉️
ବଳକା ଯାକ ସାରିବି
ଆଜିକାଲି ତଥା କଥିତ ସ୍ବଘୋଷିତ କବିମାନେ ବେଶି ହେଲେଣି ।
ମୁଁ କେବଳ ପାଠକ ହିସାବରେ ଅଛି ।
ମୋ ପାଖରେ କବିତ୍ବ ନାହିଁ ।
ତଥାପି ମୁଁ ଅଧିକାଧିକ କବିତାକୁ ବହିଷ୍କାର କରିବା ଅଭ୍ୟାସ କରିଛି ଯେଉଁମାନେ କବି ହୋଇ ନାଁ ଅର୍ଜିବାର କୃତ୍ରିମ ଚେଷ୍ଟା କରୁଛନ୍ତି ।
ସେମାନେ ଭାରତୀୟ ବାଙ୍ମୟ୍ରରେ କୁଳାଙ୍ଗାର ।
ଏହି ପରିପ୍ରେକ୍ଷୀରେ ଆପଣଙ୍କୁ କବିପଣ ଲୋଭୀ ମାନଙ୍କଠାରୁ ପୃଥକ୍ ରଖି ମୋର ମନ୍ତବ୍ୟ ରଖିଛି ।
ଆପଣ ମଧ୍ୟ ସମାନ ଅର୍ଥରେ ବୁଝିପାରି ଥିବେ ।
I really don't worry for any recognition. My literature is the love. And this love is very personal. It does not need any recognition.
Dear sir, I read the poems. You are a legendary poet. My salutes to you🙏🏼.
Namaskar! Ha ha ha … nothing like that. I write as it flows . Rather the pen writes not me. Good day 🙏
It’s your humbleness and simplicity that make you great and different.🙏🏼
A few stanzas, I have read so far, reveals a beautiful duality, between us and Him 🙏
no doubt, the words and thoughts are with great sync and gives a good feeling to go for repeated reading.
had a swift over view of the entire creation of an emotional and devotional masterpiece with meticulously selected words to club up a series of circumstances and instances through which a devout soul passes through in our day today life often regretting, revolting and wondering at "Hei mo Ishwara".
I need much more time at leisure to grasp those intricate and innate words although.
A good piece of poetic to preserve. 👌👌👍👍
Namaskar, apanank Ishwar, ama samastankara ishwar, Amasamastanku tankar dayara patra kari sabudinapaeen rakhibe boli asha. Ye Kabita ti tahara madhyama rahu, Ehi mor asha. 🙏🙏
Congratulations Sir
Sir you are a creative artist no matter which filed you enter. Very tenacious and industrious
🙏🙏🙏🙏
Thank you so much Sir for sharing such a wonderful book.
I am very humble to say that, the author introduction in this book says your simplicity, greatness and affection to motherland.
Great Work Sir... Many more should come from you in future.
ସାର୍, ଆପଣଙ୍କର ଚିନ୍ତାଧାରା ବହୁତ ସୃଜନଶୀଳ :)
Hello sir
Knowing the depth of your writing in English, I regret not learning odia.Though expressions are best put in mother tongue, I hope you will write few in English for the benefit of non-odia fans like me.
Congratulations sir for being such a great poet.
😁😁👍👍
@Lakshmi I will write in English. Thanks for your comment. Give me two years of life to give you all a good Bhashyam on a tribal saint poet's work.
Sir! Truly an amazing way to demonstrate the relationship between the Almighty and an ardent follower of Him. The follower, here, presents himself or herself as an innocent kid, a matured young boy, and a holistic person. On other side, Almighty here refers to a being who is supernatural; operator of this gigantic world; omnipresent; omnipotent; omniscient; an emotional, loving, and caring being. His existence is drawn from the content of Mahabharata, Ramayana, Pastime of Lord Krishna, and various religious scriptures. His beautiful existence is also drawn from Ontological, Cosmological, Teleological arguments given by various schools of thought
A wonderful yet innocent relationship relationship has been demonstrated.
Very nice sir. But not completed full reading. Bhakta ra bhava re bandha se thakura, he Mora Ishwara, he Mora Ishwara. Bahut sundar bhava sahita lekha heichi sir. 🙏🙏😌
Sir, Namaskar. As per the task given to me in order to express my personal view on your 50 poems , I feel honoured as well delighted to communicate the following comments to you to the best of my knowledge and ability:
Sir, every song of yours is associated with the sublime feeling of love for form as well as formless God. Your prayer to see Him is so intense and emotional that one can understand the depth of your anxiety very clearly from it. No doubt, sir you are a devine person by nature and your thought process might have tempted you to write such poetic prayers. Poems are well written by you and it seems to me as if you have ignited the sacred feelings of your heart and mind in form of prayers to go very closer to the Almighty and also to see Him. I believe that God can see us ,understand us and our deeds and misdeeds are measured by Him.
No doubt, sir, the poems you have written, have some originality in depth and are spontaneously flown in to the devine path of God. Readers will appreciate heartfully once they go through it.
With my best wishes and regards. 🙏🏽
Sir Pranaam.
Beautiful is not the word to comment on this, Sir.
Pages - 1, 19, 24, 36, 41 and 50 are the ones I loved.
I am no where to comment on this.
Excuse me for my childish comments.
Sir, Namaskar. Some of my friends have gone through your poems and found interesting and heart touching.
Yesterday I have gone through only few pages . It is nice Hrushi. Today in library I will go through. My first impression is very nice. I also feel your devotion in the flow of your lines you have written about your utmost devotion to He mo Iswara.
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