Dear Hrushikesh, You have suitably placed pathos in the strongest container of love. Here, love is unconditional and therefore whether the rituals are needed or not does not matter. Probably, you do not believe much in such rituals, but for your deep love you are doing everything. As if, you find her, feel her in such performance. But actually you are touching the void in your heart in that. You have beautifully mingled the love, demise, loss and loneliness in such a proportion that readers have to put quite some efforts to control tears. My talented kid brother, keep on, keep on writing. Apa
Prasant Mohapatra, Professor and Chair Tim Bucher Family Endowed Chair Department of Computer Science 2063 Kemper Hall University of California Davis, CA 95616
From: ajoyketan mohanty ketanajoy@yahoo.co.in Date: Mon, Aug 3, 2009 at 10:15 PM Subject: Re: Request for your comments To: Hrushikesha Mohanty mohanty.hcu@gmail.com
Dear Hrusikesh Babu ,
I read your poem " E Tihire ". It is, indeed, an excellent piece of poetry combining emotion with blind faith in form of rituals which we observe always without being sure of its results.Presentation and choice of words are also excellent.I liked it.
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Dear Hrushikesh,
You have suitably placed pathos in the strongest container of love. Here, love is unconditional and therefore whether the rituals are needed or not does not matter. Probably, you do not believe much in such rituals, but for your deep love you are doing everything. As if, you find her, feel her in such performance. But actually you are touching the void in your heart in that. You have beautifully mingled the love, demise, loss and loneliness in such a proportion that readers have to put quite some efforts to control tears.
My talented kid brother, keep on, keep on writing.
Apa
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Dear Hrushikesha,
Wonderful, and very touching indeed!
You have a talent that is very rare in technocrats. Please do keep it up.
Best regards,
Prasant
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Prasant Mohapatra, Professor and Chair
Tim Bucher Family Endowed Chair
Department of Computer Science
2063 Kemper Hall
University of California
Davis, CA 95616
Dear Prof. Mohanty,
It is indeed great!!
These are intense feelings and the first comment above summarizes it wonderfully.
Regards,
Kaushik Sahu
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From: ajoyketan mohanty ketanajoy@yahoo.co.in
Date: Mon, Aug 3, 2009 at 10:15 PM
Subject: Re: Request for your comments
To: Hrushikesha Mohanty mohanty.hcu@gmail.com
Dear Hrusikesh Babu ,
I read your poem " E Tihire ". It is, indeed, an excellent piece of poetry combining emotion with blind faith in form of rituals which we observe always without being sure of its results.Presentation and choice of words are also excellent.I liked it.
Ajoy Bhai
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