The scanned copy I got from The Prajatantra was not in good quality. Some of my esteemed blog visitors pointed out. Hence, I am posting the original I sent to Prjatantra. I will be thankful for your comments.
regards Hrushieksha
4 comments:
Anonymous
said...
Your 'Sahachara' is a lovely poem, but I am still under the spell of your short story. It will take some time to come out of it. After reading your story only ,I kept on thinking that how come with such a strong writing hand, you did not write earlier. In your this poem also you see that croco, how skillfully you could show it.
This is a wonderful poem touching every bit of my heart.Keep on writing such type of heart-touching poems.Please give a comment for below poem. have a good day. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "Sahachara"
Jnama ru mo sathe nibida mara garvaru puni sathi heba mo sesa niswashare Pratinghya tara bhisma pari atala au drudha Sneha tara snidha sitala hima jala Hele se sapita keun durbasara prachanda krodhare sahachara hele bi paeni atmiyata ghaudai dianti kahi taku ananta(randi pua ananta) hele se chhani sathi mora arambhara suryadoya tharu jibana ra surjyasta pare sethi pain ta se chira durjaya andhakara mo sahachara"
4 comments:
Your 'Sahachara' is a lovely poem, but I am still under the spell of your short story. It will take some time to come out of it. After reading your story only ,I kept on thinking that how come with such a strong writing hand, you did not write earlier. In your this poem also you see that croco, how skillfully you could show it.
Apa
Dear Sir
This is a wonderful poem touching every bit of my heart.Keep on writing such type of heart-touching poems.Please give a comment for below poem. have a good day.
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"Sahachara"
Jnama ru mo sathe nibida mara garvaru
puni sathi heba mo sesa niswashare
Pratinghya tara bhisma pari
atala au drudha
Sneha tara snidha sitala hima jala
Hele se sapita keun durbasara prachanda krodhare
sahachara hele bi paeni atmiyata
ghaudai dianti kahi taku ananta(randi pua ananta)
hele se chhani sathi mora
arambhara suryadoya tharu jibana ra surjyasta pare
sethi pain ta se chira durjaya andhakara
mo sahachara"
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Amulya kumar Dhal
Philosphy of self esteem is rightly jotted through the poem "sahachar".
Many thanks to the Poet Prof. Mohanty for his thinking and lnking process.
Respected sir,
Poem ta bahuta badhia heichhi. Sir, I would like to read one story written by you.
With Regards
Sumagna
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