Wednesday, September 15, 2010

PhulaTiE DeBaKu


Published in Dhwani Pratidhwani Aug. 2010

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4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Yes I had gone through it and honestly after reading so many kavitas of yours, this one I could get. In my first reading I was thinking it was for a lady.
Just now re read it, hopefully it is for "God"..
All modern Kavitas have multi dimension J

Regards

Babun

Anonymous said...

Yes, correct - the poem is for God. Why should somebody put a flower on feet? The
poem is for God.

Good poem. Keep it up Mohanty babu.

Hrushikesha Mohanty said...

Ha! Ha!

Babun, I'm surprised you have not been following my poems and nodding your head all the time.

Ha! Ha!

Bhai

Anonymous said...

In 4th stanza, the impression on chest; does it mean to Sribasta's footprint on the chest of God?