Sir your poem is superb i love it and written a poem by taking the heading
------------------------------ panchoti ghoda sitara marure ------------------------------ deithile bapa mora jibana rata tiea pancha ti goda jokhi lagama dharai kahithile niyanta tu and semane hebe anugami bachalya re mora bola manileni tani nele bahu aade kete sarthi kete kete priti sajadili hrudaya re kishore batare chali gale sie gyana ra sandhanare bahu bahu gyana sauntili mun je buddhira komala seje joubana pathe amada bate je madi gale kahin kete dhara srabana ra barsha bhija smruti saunti thili mun kete tani tani aji thaki se galeni ratha bi helani jirnna pachanchaidele sitala marure thanda aji mora mana hishaba nikash mana abhimana kari kari jae thaki kete je harili kete je jitil kalana karaebasi mane pade aji kahitile bapa lagam kasi ki dhare nahele padibu keun marubhume kalana nakari pare
3 comments:
Rushi - "Panchoti Ghoda..." is one of your best poems till date. It is a strong one. Congratulation.
Apa
good afternoon sir,
bipin speaking. excellent thinking. very good message to society.
what i understnad is, we all should do good work otherwise we will be penalized before death for our bad.
Sir your poem is superb
i love it
and written a poem by taking the heading
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panchoti ghoda sitara marure
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deithile bapa mora jibana rata tiea
pancha ti goda jokhi
lagama dharai kahithile
niyanta tu and semane hebe anugami
bachalya re mora bola manileni
tani nele bahu aade
kete sarthi kete kete priti sajadili hrudaya re
kishore batare chali gale sie
gyana ra sandhanare
bahu bahu gyana sauntili mun je
buddhira komala seje
joubana pathe amada bate je madi gale kahin kete
dhara srabana ra barsha bhija smruti saunti thili mun kete
tani tani aji thaki se galeni
ratha bi helani jirnna
pachanchaidele sitala marure
thanda aji mora mana
hishaba nikash mana abhimana
kari kari jae thaki
kete je harili kete je jitil
kalana karaebasi
mane pade aji kahitile bapa lagam kasi ki dhare
nahele padibu keun marubhume kalana nakari pare
Amulya Kumar Dhal
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