Tuesday, May 1, 2012

For You

Blue and blue
Blue everywhere.
Foamy blue
Don't have a clue.
Where are you? And where are you?
Touch me blue, touch me blue
and so I become touchy blue.

I float and float; Dive and dive within
To catch you  search out and in.
Found not in the bottom , not in sky
Where are you and where do you stay?
On this sea shore I lay and lie.
Thousand waves washes me away
 Put me back and wash me away.
Where are you and where do you stay? 
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 Hrushikesha Mohanty
1st May 2012


8 comments:

venkat said...

nice

venkat said...

nice

Anonymous said...

too absorbing...too deep for ordinary meaning...continue the good work ..Professor saab...

Sujata said...

Mana chnua kabita tia

Anonymous said...

Dear Sir,
Namaskar! Nice and very interesting poem

Saroj

Anonymous said...

Rushi dear,
Beautiful "colourology" and a fine poem. Now you are rapidly acquiring a control over space of expression. Earlier you were taking a longer space. Now you have sharpened it in expert hand. Just change the word "washes" to Wash in the last but 2 lines.

Congratulation.
But I have to ask Anjali that why did you suddenly fall in love with Blue. Ha...ha

Apa

Anonymous said...

Rushi dear,
Beautiful "colourology" and a fine poem. Now you are rapidly acquiring a control over space of expression. Earlier you were taking a longer space. Now you have sharpened it in expert hand. Just change the word "washes" to Wash in the last but 2 lines.

Congratulation.
But I have to ask Anjali that why did you suddenly fall in love with Blue. Ha...ha

Apa

Anonymous said...

Sir i am not so good in finding meanings hidden in a poem. And this one is so abstract but very communicative. It is true that we neither adsorb or absorb the "blue".

Bharat